第一个发帖 Hello EveryOne
原帖子来自：http://www.accessroot.com/arteam/forums/index.php?showtopic=7821
一楼原帖子：
Hello EveryOne，I'm glad to see you~
I'm a Chinese student,and I want to study this technology！
I heard that the organization of ART, So I come....
But I do not understand English Language,so I can only rely on translation tools and communicate you！
I hope that you can successfully communicate with me,and help me please!
Thank you~~
安催指导：
1、 Hello everyone, glad to see you~
a) everyone就是这种写法；省略I'm，更口语化一点，否则别扭了一些，写成 Hello everyone, glad 2cu~ 就很炫了
2、 I'm a Chinese student, and want to learn this techniques
a) study通常指的学术研究，用在这里有点重，当然，如果你是这个意思，也可以用；technology泛指技术，语意层次和knowlege差不多，所以使用程度更重的techniques
3、 I've heard that the organization of ART, so I come here....
a) I've 使用完成时态；organization貌似特别正式，有点让ART受宠若惊啊，哈哈，当然也是可以用的；here是一定要加的。
4、 But I do not understand English, so I can only rely on translation tools to communicate with you!
a) 去掉Language；and变为to
5、 I hope that you can successfully communicate with me, and help me please! (I hope that we can happily communicate with each other.外国不喜欢没有自信的人。)
a) 没有什么太大的问题，只是貌似前半句可能要使用虚拟语气
二楼Nieylana帖子原文
If RE is what you want to learn, you have indeed come to the right place.
Here you will find an almost limitless amount of knowledge to learn.
We have IMHO some of the most talented right here. And i define talent as having the knowledge AND the ability/willingness to teach others.
But again, welcome to ARTeam forums. Enjoy your stay.
嫂子指导：
6、 If RE is what you want to learn, you have indeed come to the right place.
if 从句，indeed 确实的意思。Have come 是现在完成时态--- 形式是主语+have+动词的过去分词。
7、 Here you will find an almost limitless amount of knowledge to learn.
在这你能够发现很多值得学习的知识。Limit 是限制的意思，less 是否定后缀。例如，homeless,就是无家可归的意思。
8、 We have IMHO some of the most talented right here. And i define talent as having the knowledge AND the ability/willingness to teach others.
Define sth as ….把什么定义为。。。。
9、 But again, welcome to ARTeam forums. Enjoy your stay.
Enjoy ….Enjoy yourself.
三楼帖子原文：
RE are Reverse Engineering mean?
If yes, then I would not come to the wrong places ~~~, gaga~~~~
I very much agree with you said that sentence : "And i define talent as having the knowledge AND the ability/willingness to teach others!"
If I know how things will definitely share the U.S.!
I'm using Google translation tools,So,There will certainly be a lot of the content of a syntax error!
I came here another reason for this is that I want to learn about English,
Also requests the understanding！
安催指导：
10、 RE means Reverse Engineering?
a) 这个不用解释太多，翻译工具的拙劣是一眼就可以看出来的)
11、 If yes, then I have not come to the wrong places ~~~, gaga~~~~
a) 完成时态
12、 I agree with you very much when you are saying "And i define talent as having the knowledge AND the ability/willingness to teach others!"
a) 注意副词very much的位置；（ I totally[完全] agree with you when you ….
b) agree sb. when sb. is saying "..."是常见的一种语句
13、 If I know how things will definitely share the U.S.!
a) 没有看懂是怎么回事~~~oops
14、 I'm using Google translation tools,So,There will certainly be a lot of syntax errors of the content!
a) 复数
15、 I came here for another reason that I want to learn English,
a) 调整语序
16、 Also requests understanding!
a) 不需要the
帖子原文：
QUOTE (XLI @ Feb 20 2009, 11:22 AM)
Welcome
Do u speak traditional Chinese?
Yes,I do`~
I have been talking about Chinese language and writing Chinese characters from my childhood!
This is my first time on the other countries of the BBS and Writing The English language !
I hope you do not joke my English，and Tell me what I had said in the grammar error!
I will do my best to learn English language for communicate with the U.S.
Thanks again~
安催指导：
17、 I have been speeking Chinese and writing Chinese characters from my childhood!
a) speek Chinese (会说某种语言用speak+语言)
18、 This is my first time on BBS of the other countries and Writing English!
a) BBS of the other countries, 或者可以写作foreign BBS
19、 I hope you do not joke on my English，and Tell me what's wrong in the sentence!
If I make some mistakes, please tell me. Thank you.
20、 I will do my best to learn English to communicate with the Americans.
安催注：我说的不一定对的，不要盲目相信；当然如果说错什么，我一定不是恶意的。:)